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Children's writing: The Sky - by AK

24.01.23



Thank you for this super writing about the sky, AK. You have describe a school child, Chloe, who gets caught in a storm. You have really thought carefully about the details to include to show how scary this sky was to her.


For example:

'A storm had started...'

'Lightning shot down...'

'Houses were destroyed...'

'... before the sharp lightning shot them...'



Thank you so much for sharing this.

 

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