Children's writing: The Man on the Road - by Krish

What a super way top start your writing, Krish. It is intriguing and makes your reader want to read on because they want to know why he's there and what is happening.

You have used lovely onomatopoeia (rumble / crack), as well as some super similes (faster than a cheetah  / faster than Earth).

Thank you for sharing this lovely writing.

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