Children's writing: The Beast - by Rayyan

What a powerful way to start your writing, Rayyan, with a three-word sentence!

Example: There he stood.

This is a really good technique because you can't give too much information here, yet just enough to make the reader carry on. They would want to know who this was where he was, as well was why he was there.

Sometimes it's the apparently simple techniques in writing that are the most important - and you've certainly chosen well here. Great job.

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