Children's writing: The Magic Room - by Kiyan

Thank you for sharing your room description with us, Kiyan! It is wonderful to read. It's a tricky task to describe a room at length and keep the detail original and captivating, yet you've managed it!

You start with a super corridor description (Deep inside the darkest depths of a corridor...) that leads us to a door. This helps to build the tension - just what is behind this door?

Well, we had better read your writing to find out!

Let's read ...