Children's writing: The Grey Sky - by Ayush

Thank you for sharing your wonderful writing, Ayush. Our task was to describe a grey sky, but make is sound scary and menacing. You have done this brilliantly!

You have used so many writing techniques.

Compound colour: ghost-grey

Simile: like a whistle / like arctic

Personification: the sky 'murmured'

Let's read ...

The ghost gray sky murmured softly like a whistle.

The ash clouds formed patterns like arctic ice.The orange sunset was on the horizon.

Ruk got distracted .Suddenly the black dragon came out of nowhere and captured Ruk. Ruk tried to escape from the dragon but the dragon was too powerful.