Children's writing: The Grey Sky - by Rayyan

Thank you for sharing your grey sky description, Rayyan. It is rich in word and figurative language choices that build a melancholic yet edgy mood - great job!

For example:

• miserable, thick blanket covering every centimeter of the colossal sky
• ear-piercing roar
• darted like a fighter jet
• razor-sharp, knife-like charcoal rocks
• melodious music

Then, you break the grey sky description with a suggestion of something on the horizon - a glowing mustard light. This is intriguing and keeps the reader's interest. Well done.

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