Children's writing: The Forest Door - by Jayden

You have used the door in this forest as a focal point, Jayden, and it draws your reader in so well. You drip-feed us lots of information about the door in a really interesting way, such as telling us the roots move like slithering snakes. Suddenly the door flings open and a portal to a new dimension is revealed - excellent idea.

Thank you so much for sharing your super writing.

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