Children's writing: The Dragon - by AK

You have included lovely similes in this writing about the dragon, AK. This helps your reader to imagine what something was like.

Example:

• roared like a lion
• hissed like a snake
• moving like my teacher who moves everywhere

You have also used an idiom to describe how the girl feels:

• butterflies in her tummy

And, what a great word choice using 'quandary' to show how she wasn't sure what to do. 

Super-duper writing, AK.

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