Children's writing: The Bear - by AK

You have done a brilliant job of creating tension in your writing, AK. You have described a bear, but you have then described how the water was crawling nearer. This is called personification, where we give a human characteristic to something that's not human (so, the water was crawling like a human). And, then, the bear freezes for a thousand years - great idea!

Your final sentence is amazing - it shows us how vulnerable humans are when faced with the prospect of this beast!

• We are ants to this creature and their food.

Thanks you for sharing this super writing.

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