Children's writing: Dark Nights - by Anniyah

You have created a very distinct mood through your choice of words and style of writing, Anniyah. Your adjective choices, such as clangorous, luxurious and gloaming, help to set the scene brilliantly.

You have chosen to show this really interesting character through a chatty voice/narration, and this works so well. It makes the reader feel as if they are privy to her thoughts and feelings and they are then taking this journey with her.

Super job, Anniyah!

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