Children's writing: Boudica - by Nabeeha

 
This excellent 'Show, Don't Tell' that you've created for your character helps us to work out how she is feeling, Nabeeha - well done!

'Boudica's face was dripping with sweat and she was gasping for air...'

You go on to explain her strength using small details such as the way she grips her axe:

'Her gnarled hands seized hold of the iron-grey axe...'

Excellent! 

Let's read ...