Children's writing: The Door - by Nabeeha

Starting your writing with a simile is a great way to help your reader to imagine this scene - and excellent choice, Nabeeha!

'Like a figure carved from stone, his long-fingered nails slowly reached for the door...'

You have used so many techniques to build the tension here - adverbs (slowly), pronoun (something) and noises (Thud!). 

Thanks for sharing this super writing.

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