The Voice: How to choose the perfect character voice for 11+ writing
20.06.24

If you are helping your child with 11+ character descriptions in exam writing, you might have discussed' the voice'.
It's one of many features of a person that can show a character's personality or intentions.
A voice can signal danger or reassurance. I can signal deceit or trust.
A voice can add to the mood of a description.
In 11+ writing, we rely, to some degree, on cliché because getting our message across quickly is critical. For example, if our character wishes to conceal something or trick us, we might describe them as slick-tongued. It's a bit like a slick-tongued salesperson—apologies to all salespeople. I know that is a cliché.
So, what types of 'voice' are there?
Below are some brief character descriptions and a few ways to describe a voice.

Discuss with your child which 'voice' best suits each character.
As always, children surprise us by choosing the ones we least expect, but if they can give a good reason why, that's perfect!

A giraffe who wants to trick the zoo keeper into setting him free.

A character who is feeling upset.

A character who has lived for over 1,000 years so far.
Choose your voice!
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a slick voice
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honey-tongued
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snaky voice
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a brittle voice
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a dry voice
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a snarly voice
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a growly voice
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forked-tongued
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a toady voice
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a rich voice
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a voice as lonely as a crypt
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a voice as haunting as a grave
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a caterwauling voice
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a feeble voice
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a trembling voice
You can make your own up.
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A ____ voice (add in an adjective).
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… a voice as ….. as a …. (a simile).
Enjoy your discussions!
Anna