Children's writing: The Storm - by Rayyan

What a super piece of writing, Rayyan. You have used an impressive range of figurative language in your writing, as well as carefully chosen noun phrases.


For example:

• towering, charcoal gates
• ash-grey path
• blink of an eye
• ear-piercing
• vicious roar
• BANG!
• Electric-blue lightning darted down like an eagle
  

Thank you so much for sharing this.

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