Children's writing: The Magic Room (a description) - by Priyoti

This is a joy to read, Priyoti. You have though carefully about how to use all the techniques from a writer's palette to give meaning. What is very impressive about your description is the structure - you guide the reader around the room, and it makes sens. You are not taking the reader randomly from one part of the room to another; you have orchestrated the room perfectly with words! Well done.

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