Children's writing: Lost in space (using adverbs) - by Reyansh

 Thank you for sharing this super writing, Reyansh. Your task was to try and include adverbs to give the reader more information. And, you've done this really well. 

Example:

nervously

kindly

proudly

mostly

I was also so pleased to see that you had included dialogue. It can be tricky to get this right and use the correct punctuation, so well done.

Fantastic job, Reyansh!

Let's read ...

Lost in space

One day, a boy was lost from his family on an unknown planet. His family and him were expert astronauts. He searched for his family, and his family searched for him, but he ended up being more lost at the end.

The next day, he met an alien who came nervously because in its whole life it hadn’t seen a human.

‘What is your name’ asked the alien kindly.
‘My name is James. What is yours?’ the boy said.
‘Sadly, I don’t have one. You boy, you are a very lucky earthling on this planet,’ said the alien proudly and walked away from [the boy] James.

James was very confused why the alien called him an earthling, but mostly why it said that he was lucky.

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