Children's writing: The Iron Man - by Selena

 

This writing really brings the mystery, size and power of The Iron Man to life, Selena. Apart for the fact that you've used a huge range of writing techniques here, you have also taken your time to build up the tension. You don't just tell us that the iron man was big and he fell off a cliff. You build up the details.

This is a super piece of writing and thanks for sharing it with us.

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