Children's writing: The Cave - by Onvi

 
You have built a lovely image of this cave. Onvi. You start by describing the setting and then take us on a journey to learn more about Eve, an 'adventurous woman'. It is intriguing that she feels the need to jump into this magical rockpool - the idea that she just can't help herself is both captivating and petrifying all at the same time!

Thanks for sharing your writing, Onvi.

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