Children's writing: The Avalanche - by Selena

Thank you for sharing your super writing, Selena. Your language choices perfectly describe the terrifying situation here in the snowy mountains, Selena. Not only is there an avalanche, but a dragon!

Examples:

• Snow burst through the trees and was barreling down the mountain...
• (the avalanche) snapped the trees like spaghetti...
• Like a roller-coaster, the avalanche moved in surges ...

All this noise and commotion wakes the dragon, so let's find out what happens...