Children's writing: rhetorical questions - by Hana

What excellent rhetorical questions you've chosen, Hana (i.e. Who knew that parents could get scared? / What should I do next?) They really make your reader think about what's happening. 

You have really built up a clear picture of how boisterous the dragon is compared to his boy/elf owner, and how funny mum is when she grabs a water-spray bottle - this works really well.

Thank you so much for sharing!

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