Children's writing: Revenge! Using similes - by Jayden

You have brought this scene to life, Jayden, by using some carefully created similes. Your descriptions create a feeling of an inhospitable city, dark and hot and under attack.

• Their city was as hot as the sun's rays.
• All of us were falling down like a parachute.
  
  

This is super! Well done and thank you so much for sharing this.

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