Children's writing: personification - by AK

What super personification choices, AK! Each one adds a layer of detail and atmosphere to your forest setting and it helps to bring the story alive! Excellent job! 

• the heaving forest
• the magical, moving path
• the whispering trees
• everything was alive
• the vines showed their princess the way
• the leaves pinged open with joy
• the bees humming a tune
• the forest singing a song
• pink flowers rose up from the dead
• daylight breaking through the forest
• the dragon had a mind of its own

Thank you so much for sharing your writing.

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