suspense writing by sam, age 9

Road's End - by Sam

An ominous figure stood isolated and deserted with a vacant expression staring at ruins of a car. His bandana flying furiously in the wind. He was spinning the tyre of the car slowly. All of a sudden a car came round the corner of the rock. A happy, jolly man in the car. The happy man said to the mystery man, "Hop in I will take you to the gas station." The man walked in and sat in silence.