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Describing a character - by Talha

27.10.21

Talha, you have been learning how to use compound colours to describe settings and characters. This is a great choice - mud-green eyes! It perfectly captures the character as well. There is nothing shiny about Dobby! Also, you have used a lovely description of his eyes - 'a stony stare'. His ears are certainly bat shaped and pointy and his grin does look evil! Well done!