Children's writing: expanded noun phrases - by Selena
10.10.22
Thank you for sharing this super writing, Selena!
In our class, we thought about expanded noun phrases (so, this can be adding one or more adjectives to a noun). The reason we do this is to give our readers enough details to imagine something. You've done a great job here and have used many, such as 'icy, cloudy, twirled, perilous'.
By the way, what an excellent opening you have chosen!
In our class, we thought about expanded noun phrases (so, this can be adding one or more adjectives to a noun). The reason we do this is to give our readers enough details to imagine something. You've done a great job here and have used many, such as 'icy, cloudy, twirled, perilous'.
By the way, what an excellent opening you have chosen!
Her giant hair flowed in the rhythm of the wind as she gazed down at her village.'
The 'rhythm of the wind' is a powerful, metaphorical image. Excellent choice!
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