Children's writing: The Storm - by Ayush

What a great way to start your writing, Ayush! You have shown how ordinary a day David thought this would be, only to find out that it's not at all!

I love the way you have described the aliens using a simile:

Suddenly aliens came from outer space and flooded the land like an exploding firework.


Thank you for sharing your super writing, Ayush.

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