Children's writing: The Portal to Olympus - by Alicia
11.11.22
This is a super technique to start a description, Alicia: make something that's key in the 'story' of the room, to at first seem insignificant. This creates suspense and mystery.
Hidden in the shadows stood a boring cinnamon-brown door.
As you guide us into the room, your detailed descriptions build a sense that this room has a life of its own.
Top job!
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