Children's writing: The Island - by Nabeeha

What a great way to hook the reader and draw them into your writing, Nabeeha: 

I remember this place.

When I read this, I wanted to know who this was and what the place was. I also wanted to know why they remembered it and how long it had been since they had been here. Also, how did they get here as it seems they are a little surprised about being there.

Who knew so much could be asked from just 4 words! I was hooked.

Well done.

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