Children's writing: The Homeland - by Jayden

Thank you for sharing your super writing, Jayden. You have created an extremely atmospheric homeland for this character, full of fear and dread. Your choice to call the mountain 'Cobra Mountain' is excellent because cobras lay in wait until they attack. Your idea to add a golden stick that can help to save the land is fabulous as we need to have hope; it will also help to solve the problem facing the character.

Thanks for sharing.

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