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Children's writing: The Friendly Ghost - by Reyansh

15.03.23

 

Wow - you've set the scene in the forest so well, Reyansh. You've thought about the temperature, the light and the lanterns glowing. Your description of Casper is spot on!

Well done and thanks for sharing.

Let's read ...

 

The Friendly Ghost

Reyansh was taking a calm, and nice walk in the woods. There was a chilly breeze going in the dark, cold forest like area in there. As Reyansh walked down the pathway in the woods with tangerine-orange lanterns hanging down trees, he caught a glimpse of something hovering in the air above him. It was a ghost and its name was Casper. Casper  had a gaunt and skull like head, inquisitive eyes, he was as white as alabaster, and felt gooey and cloudy.

Suddenly, he tried to run and call his mother and father but there was no internet! He first thought  Casper wanted to haunt him and gobble him up whole but, he did nothing that scared him. The only thing he wanted, was to be friends. Reyansh was frozen for numerous minutes as he had been scared to death. He waited, then he figured out  Casper wasn’t haunting him because he was a friendly ghost! So now [with Reyansh seeing that Casper is friendly] he was friends with Casper.