Children's writing: Onomatopoeia - by Jayden

Wow! You have worked so hard to include onomatopoeic words in your writing, Jayden. This adds atmosphere and helps the reader to imagine the scene.

Example:
The hush of the dark ocean was terrifying. It looked like many shadows were whizzing and fizzing around the diver.

This is excellent! Thank you so much for sharing.

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