Children's writing: making words pop off the page - writing by Saiesha

Saiesha, thank you for sharing your super writing with us! It's always an absolute pleasure to write with you in our Weekly Writing Club, and you contribute so much to our discussions. So, it's lovely to see your writing and how your carefully chosen figurative language pops off the page to help the reader create an image in their mind, such as:

'Bursting flints of ash-grey rock flew about as the melancholy monster stood up, like a bully, to its full, imposing height'.

Here are three of your pieces of writing.

Let's read!