Children's writing: Glow - by Selena

What an amazing setting description to start your writing, Selena! You have perfectly captured the ominous grey sky and this sets the mood of the writing.

Here are just two examples of your choices:

The ghostly-grey mist was as thick as pea soup.

The sky throttled the land as the nacreous snowflakes seemed to flood the land with their pallid glow.


Top job and thanks for sharing, Selena.

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