Children's writing: a story (The Mythological Beast) - by Nehal

Thank you for sharing your amazing story, Nehal. In our Year 4 group, we have been writing a story about a town that was sucked of all colour by a beast. Your writing has a great structure with a flash forward at the beginning and it opens with three separate, alliterative words to draw the reader in:

Devastation. Darkness. Destroyed.

I'm hooked already! Let's read ...