Character description of a villain - by Muhammad

Muhammad, you have just joined us in Powerful Writers' Club, and I am so glad that you have! You are not afraid of experimenting with new vocabulary - and this is a great attitude to have because you will learn so much about writing this way. 

This is a very powerful sentence:

'As he ambled past me, I could smell his rancid breath and saw his bloodshot eyes.'

Well done! Thank you so much for sharing your writing with us.