A rainy new york (setting) by Sam, age 9

A Rainy New York, by Sam

Walking in the rain was so dull. People shoving me around to get home. I even forgot my umbrella. The neon lights stabbed me in the eyes. A car drove through a puddle and the water hit me in the face. I am a sad and miserable person.

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I love your use of personification Sam (The neon lights stabbed me in the eyes). Your writing really makes me feel as if this person is not enjoying New York in the rain. I can't wait to read more. Thank you for sharing this with us!